everything here is good but it lacks A grade depth - talk more specifically about the layout, colours, mise-en-scene - does it all work? what does it communicate?copyright info - is it all there?you brush over things a little too much hereB-
everything here is good but it lacks A grade depth - talk more specifically about the layout, colours, mise-en-scene - does it all work? what does it communicate?
ReplyDeletecopyright info - is it all there?
you brush over things a little too much here
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