Good work. Only suggestions would be that you remove release date (more likely on the advert not CD case), add some more e.g's that aren't RnB/Hip-Hop, and at the top of the conclusion write 'after analysing a range of digipaks, the conventions appear to be:' and then have the list.
Good work. Only suggestions would be that you remove release date (more likely on the advert not CD case), add some more e.g's that aren't RnB/Hip-Hop, and at the top of the conclusion write 'after analysing a range of digipaks, the conventions appear to be:' and then have the list.
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very good, A
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