you need to discuss each example more and say WHY those choices have been made - why those props/settings/clothes? what do they connote?
camera and editing are very weak - you can't just say 'lots' - you need to pick specific techniques that are regularly used and say why - what impact/purpose do they have??
Some improvements but still areas lacking full discussion (Male characters for example - why are they so often presented as such?).
Camera and editing still lacking discussion too - which shots/transitions are most common in your genre and why? What do they communicate/connote/signify?
you need to discuss each example more and say WHY those choices have been made - why those props/settings/clothes? what do they connote?
ReplyDeletecamera and editing are very weak - you can't just say 'lots' - you need to pick specific techniques that are regularly used and say why - what impact/purpose do they have??
need more than 1 e.g. per point too
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Some improvements but still areas lacking full discussion (Male characters for example - why are they so often presented as such?).
ReplyDeleteCamera and editing still lacking discussion too - which shots/transitions are most common in your genre and why? What do they communicate/connote/signify?
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