Feedback session

On Friday 17th October our class had a feedback session and our teacher made us watch our other classmates video; our video was judged buy a group of four boys and they collectively evaluated our work. Our work was marked through a mark scheme which ranges from level 1 being the lowest  - level 5 being the highest; it was categorised using the following table:
 

Appropriate shot	Low level 3
Framing	Low level 3
Material appropriate to task	Level 4
Mise-En-Scene	Low level 3
Appropriate editing	High level 3
Varied shot transitions	Level 3
Editing and sound appropriate	Low level 3
Overall mark/Level	26 = C

Apart from the table we were also given good feedback:


Good points:


1. Good use of transitions
2. A story line which makes sense
3. Smooth transitions which fits in with the theme effectively
4. The slow motion effect which was put in was highly effective and impacted the video positively but we hinted that we shouldn't over use it so that it still has the appropriate effect.



Areas to improve:


1. There are bins visible in the filming and to fix this we will be re-shooting those specific scenes.
2. Uneven camera shots were also mentioned and to fix this we will be making sure that our tripods and framing is straight.
3. The use of the same location, to fix this we will definitely be changing our location and film in Lincoln City and London.
4. There was visible red eye in our male actors eyes.
5. Our cast members kept on looking into the camera so it was obvious that we were filming and didn't have the everyday life we were looking to have.
6. More use of props.